2/6/14
Two solutions to the oppressive system I can propose are to stop the
budget cuts to the education system and make more electives available to
students. Budget cuts to education discourage students to pursue a higher
education because many can’t get the necessary financial help they need. The
debt that many face after college is sometimes much higher than the job they
land. To me that is an oppressive way of trying to keep people where they are
even thought they’re told to go to school and get a higher education. Stopping
budget cuts will give more opportunities to people who want to get an education
without financial stress.
Making more electives available to students will give them a better
opportunity to find a sense of who they are and interest them more in school.
Giving students a chance to find who they are and who they want to be starts
with education. Education that of course has standards but lets the student
choose from a wide range of activities and classes that influence the entire
whole of education in a positive way.
Ana, you are having a lot of great ideas happen at once. Almost every sentence you have here is a good opinion or insight that can become its own paragraph topic sentence. We'll talk Friday about how to make that happen. Good work!
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